Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Television was one of the greatest
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of
20th
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century.
However
, there is a serious
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going on whether televisions are needed due to
its
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bad influence
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individual lives. In my opinion, I agree with the statement. Most of the people have televisions at their houses. It has become a part of their entertainment
time
. With the advancement in
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technology and OTT platforms, televisions have become unavoidable from
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everyone's
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life and made them stop going outside to
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,
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since they could enjoy from their home itself which makes the less sociable and communicative with outsiders.
Moreover
, The size and
the
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clarity has
also
changed which makes them watch it without any boredom.
For instance
, companies like Sony and
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manufactures high definition screens
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low prices and additional offers.
This
could be a reason why
peoplehave
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people have
become irresponsible and spend their
time
with no meaning.
However
, there are other reasons too.
Additionally
, with the arrival of new news channels, many elderly people spend so many hours watching the daily updates. As there are no other leisure activities for them, it makes them watch current affairs without any breaks.
For example
, at my house, my
grand father
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grandfather
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watches around 5 to 6 hours daily
infront
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in front
of the television, which
also
is very dangerous to their eyesight as most of them
loses
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their vision because of stressing their eyesight.
Consequently
, It harms both the health and our social
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character
. In conclusion, it seems that watching
televisioncan
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television can
television
affect both mentally and physically.
Eventhough
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Even though
it has a lot of drawbacks, it helps us to gain knowledge on the current affairs.
Therefore
, I recommend
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the
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quality
time
with friends and relatives
instead
of using that
time
on TVs.
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