Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Television was one of the greatest

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of

20th

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century.

However

, there is a serious

dicussion

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discussion

going on whether televisions are needed due to

its

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bad influence

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individual lives. In my opinion, I agree with the statement. Most of the people have televisions at their houses. It has become a part of their entertainment

time

. With the advancement in

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technology and OTT platforms, televisions have become unavoidable from

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everyone's

everyones

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life and made them stop going outside to

theaters

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,

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since they could enjoy from their home itself which makes the less sociable and communicative with outsiders.

Moreover

, The size and

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clarity has

also

changed which makes them watch it without any boredom.

For instance

, companies like Sony and

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manufactures high definition screens

with

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low prices and additional offers.

This

could be a reason why

peoplehave

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people have

become irresponsible and spend their

time

with no meaning.

However

, there are other reasons too.

Additionally

, with the arrival of new news channels, many elderly people spend so many hours watching the daily updates. As there are no other leisure activities for them, it makes them watch current affairs without any breaks.

For example

, at my house, my

grand father

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watches around 5 to 6 hours daily

infront

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in front

of the television, which

also

is very dangerous to their eyesight as most of them

loses

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their vision because of stressing their eyesight.

Consequently

, It harms both the health and our social

charachter

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character

. In conclusion, it seems that watching

televisioncan

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television can

television

affect both mentally and physically.

Eventhough

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Even though

it has a lot of drawbacks, it helps us to gain knowledge on the current affairs.

Therefore

, I recommend

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the

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quality

time

with friends and relatives

instead

of using that

time

on TVs.