Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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International Sports
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and
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competitions
are a better way to exhibit love for
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country in a positive manner. I strongly agree with
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statement that these
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are vital because
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to maintain
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international harmony and boost
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international
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, these build camaraderie among the nations which participate. Sportsmen from different
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play with each other. They come in contact with each other. They share
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ideas and build a relationship. Gradually,
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spreads among the nations and helps to ease the tensions.
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, Pakistan and Indian often play cricket match to ease the tension between these
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, during these
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players from different
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meet each other which spreads positivity.
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eventually leads to international peace.
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, due to these international sports competitions
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spike. Spectators to watch these games visit the host
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. They
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for
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. Sports lovers prefer to watch these games live. They
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travel
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leads to
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in
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the olympics
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olympics
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a
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myriad
number of people
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to the host country to have a live glimpse of
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event. In conclusion,
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events
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are a medium to build a positive
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among nations. I strongly agree with
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because
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boost
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the
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international
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and peace.
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