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Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is argued that life in large
cities
 has become more challenging than ever while some
people
 claim that it is the opposite, which
it
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is much easier. In my opinion, I would agree with the latter statement because living in big
cities
 provide easy access to all facilities that
people
 need them for their daily life. Advocates of the difficulty in living in major
cities
 believe that the cost of living in these
cities
 has increased rapidly for the
last
 ten years. As more
people
 have increasingly been moved to
the
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large
cities
, the price of renting and buying a house has skyrocketed.
This
 is because there is more demand but lower supply, which means that residents are unable to find affordable accommodation. For that reason, dwellers of the main
cities
 suffer from the high expense of living.
On the other hand
, I believe that one of the significant advantages of living in bigger
cities
 is the accessibility to public and private facilities.
People
 can
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 their basics and nonessentials needs at any time without the need to commute to another city. Residents of major
cities
,
for example
, can find a superior range of facilities,
such
 as schools, health care, and shopping malls.
This
 would certainly have made
people
's lives getting easier because they do not have to waste their time searching for places that meet their essentials. To sum up,
although
 it might be sensible to consider life in the main
cities
 not easier as before, I would go against
this
 view because it facilitates the process of approaching any place
people
 want to visit.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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