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When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#factor #appearance
Nowadays, we see real estate is a booming sector of our society and demand for framework development will increase rapidly in future. While constructing a building one should prioritize the important aspect like usable field
then
 think about the display of the building or the amenities which can take up actual usable area.
Firstly
, if a building is used for residential purpose there should be proper planning to utilize the maximum field for the apartment rather than more focusing on exterior designing.
For example
, it is a one-bedroom flat than may include a sizable living place, kitchen and master bedroom which is perfect for a couple.
Secondly
, while building a commercial base, utilization of space will be office cabins, cafeteria, pantry place, conference place and desk for employees,
this
 way cooperate offices can maximize the use of available carpet slot. Additional if one spends more on the appearance of the building
this
 will eventually increase the prices for final products.
Although
, the exterior presentation of buildings is
also
 important to attract buyers, clients and tourists. A beautiful and attractive framework makes our city look mesmerizing.
For instance
, Dubai is famous for its eye-catching tall buildings and
this
also
 a major factor for tourist attraction there. It is important for marketing purpose
also
 as an eye-catching base can boost property sale which will result in higher profit.
Moreover
, the exterior presence is a must to have a makeable
first
 impression. To recapitulate above, I strongly agree that the primary factor while constructing any building should be future planning of usable capacity and the
second
 factor can be a look of a building.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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