In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
There is no doubt that in some nations the average
weight
of the people is rising may Use synonyms
causes
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cause
decreased
level of fitness and Add an article
a decreased
health
. The sedentary Use synonyms
life style
and Correct your spelling
lifestyle
food
habits are the main reasons Use synonyms
of
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for
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this
problems. Correct determiner usage
these
However
, changing Linking Words
food
and doing regular Use synonyms
exercise
may solve Use synonyms
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this
issues.
The vital cause of the obesity of the population which may lead to several Correct determiner usage
these
health
difficulties is eating habits. Nowadays, most of the residents of the countries work outside of their home for a long time. Use synonyms
Thus
, they do not get enough time Linking Words
making
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to make
food
at the home. Use synonyms
Therefore
, they Linking Words
depends
on Change the verb form
depend
the
ready-made Correct article usage
apply
foods
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contain
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that contain
high level
calories and cholesterols which may Add a hyphen
high-level
causes
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cause
weight
gain. Another reason is doing less physical activities. Use synonyms
For example
, people complete their work sitting on the chair using the laptop that discourage them Linking Words
going
outside and doing Change preposition
from going
exercise
regularly. That’s why, they become obese resulting Use synonyms
several
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in several
health
issues like high blood pressure, Diabetics etc.
To solve Use synonyms
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this problems
, Change the determiner
this problem
these problems
should
avoid packaging ready Correct pronoun usage
one should
foods
and take daily physical activities. Generally, factory-based Use synonyms
foods
contain high cholesterols and preservatives. The cholesterols increase the deposition of fat in Use synonyms
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body
lead to Add an article
the body
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a rise
rise
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rising
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weight
, and some preservatives Change preposition
in weight
causes
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cause
for
some Change preposition
apply
health
difficulties. So, changing Use synonyms
food
pattern may help to reduce Use synonyms
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weight
gain process of Correct article usage
the weight
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body
. Add an article
the body
On the other hand
, regular Linking Words
exercise
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keep
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keeps
body
fitness and help to burn deposited fat of the Use synonyms
body
. Use synonyms
For instance
, 30 minutes Linking Words
walking
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of walking
everyday
can balance Replace the word
every day
blood-glucose
level in human.
In conclusion, taking daily Add an article
the blood-glucose
exercise
and avoiding factory-made Use synonyms
foods
help to maintain good Use synonyms
health
and to keep fitness.Use synonyms
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