Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are no the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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