News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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While some people are of the view that media content delivered through digital and print resonates better when pictures are displayed rather than the usage of

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, others believe that

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have a much stronger effect on the audience. In my opinion, I strongly believe that readers and viewers can gain better insights into a story when it is explained with context which is best presented with

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. More often than not, people have a tendency to misconstruing information when it is shared in a pictorial format as the context is critical to understand the writers’ true intent. Images alone can be misleading to most and lead to confusion, thereby, losing the essence of the story. There is a higher probability of wrongful spreading of rumours, termed as “fake news” in today’s world

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the background of a story. Another supporting point in the

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of verbalizing content through any medium is that the story-teller would have the liberty of sharing a balanced opinion on a subject matter without taking sides. As ardent consumers of online content, we have the right to read or view information

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primarily based on facts without any prejudice and

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can be achieved through a written account about any topic. In conclusion, though some people feel that “pictures speak louder than

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” when stories are shared with the public, I strongly feel that images to depict a version could potentially have a negative impact on the audience as it would not be possible to explain intricate details through a picture and information will be taken out of context.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

271 words

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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

Fully explain your ideas

Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women. Do you agree or disagree?

Some cities create new housing for their growing populations by constructing a small number of high-rise buildings. Other cities create more of low-rise buildings. Which solution is better, in your opinion

In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents choosing to self-educate their children at home rather than sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

In many workplaces, online communication is becoming more commonplace than face-to-face meetings. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

some people feel young people should follow traditions of their societies, others believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.