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In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging out quality of life. do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern world, multinational
companies
 have acquired a large
market
through
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 advertising their products. While some
people
 claim that these
companies
 have a detrimental effect on the common
peoples
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people's
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 life, others believe the exact opposite.
This
 essay would examine why I agree with the statement.
To begin
 with, large industries have
sucessfully
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successfully
 created a misconception among ordinary
people
 regarding the quality of the products they make.
This
 has lead individuals, especially teenagers to buy expensive materials despite
of
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the heavy cost of the product which
lead
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 to
have
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 superiority complex
inbetween
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between
in between
 their friends and other
people
. To illustrate,
report
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 says that, from 2011 to 2020, apparel brands like Puma, Nike and Adidas had a rapid growth in their sales in India, which clearly shows that the trends of
new
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 generation have helped them a lot.
Secondly
, small business
have
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 to struggle a lot to survive in the
market
 even though they provide better quality services, so
this
 is a great discouraging factor for the upcoming
enterpreneurs
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entrepreneurs
.
For instance
, experts
says
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 that, during the year 2008 in
United
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the United
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 States, the percentage of new
enterpreneurs
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entrepreneurs
 were less than 20
percentage
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 due to the heavy competition from the opponents.
In addition
,
this
 would
also
 affect the economical progress of a country as the money should cycle in the
market
 not only from the giant industries but
also
 from the small industries. To conclude, in my opinion, I agree with the statement as it affects the
life style
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 of the
people
 in a bad way. Government has a vital role in maintaining the
market
 for both types of
companies
 and have to introduce
tax
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a tax
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 system to the
companies
 according to their turnover.
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