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computers are being used more and more in education .discuss the advantages and disadvantages

#computers #education
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The extensive use of technology in every aspect of fields is common in the contemporary world.
Thus
, in the educational
sector
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 we can observe, electronic appliances
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 a vital role.
This
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accesibilty
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accessibility
 and self-reliance of
students
 and
on the contrary
 certain drawbacks like lack of interaction and health issues. Nowadays,
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schools and universities are using more in their studies .An important consideration is
students
 are able to access the required information around the clock. which leads to
self-reliance
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 of the
students
.From the early
chilhood
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childhood
 itself ,the pupils would be able to gather the information they required.To cite an example ,for a given
assinments
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assignments
assignment
 by the use of laptops, without the help of others easily they can complete the given tasks.
secondly
, the main drawback is lacking
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communication skill.
further
, the opportunity to interact with teachers and friends would decrease due to accessing machines individually.
Moreover
,the smaller ones social interaction towards society could be denied from the early stage of their development
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Another issue is, the access
of
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computer
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a computer
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 for more than two hours leads to poor
eye sight
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.
for example
, due to online classes in
srilanka
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Srilanka
Sri Lanka
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 due to
pandamic
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pandemic
 situation ,the promoted grade
students
 have not seen their
class mates
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 physically and does not have contact with their new friends,and
also
 due to long hour of
studing
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studying
standing
 online many has experienced poor
eye sight
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 which is a good example most
students
 have newly started wearing spectacles. To conclude, the deployment of computers has both
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pros and cons but
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positivity overweigh the negativity.
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 believe
this
 is fairly a better development, towards education. . By the use
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sufficient
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 measures, the drawbacks can be avoided in future
also
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Interactive learning tools
  • 2. Multimedia presentations
  • 3. Online resources
  • 4. Distance learning
  • 5. Remote areas
  • 6. Digital literacy
  • 7. Problem-solving
  • 8. Critical thinking
  • 9. Technology-driven world
  • 10. Digital textbooks
  • 11. Administrative tasks
  • 12. Cost-effective
  • 13. Distraction
  • 14. Social media
  • 15. Over-reliance
  • 16. Traditional skills
  • 17. Handwriting
  • 18. Face-to-face communication
  • 19. Technical problems
  • 20. Digital divide
  • 21. Inequality
  • 22. Educational opportunities
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