Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or dis agree with this.

It is important to consider whether
music
is
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path to bring individuals from various cultures as well as ages together or not. Many masses argue that
this
is not crackerjack to mix different communities. But, I
am totally agree
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with the given statement. In my opinion,
music
has its own language which attracts every person who is
music
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lover.
To begin
with, our world
have
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multitudinous sounds in every part. Numerous traditions have their own
music
.
Although
,
people
from dissimilar
culture
cannot understand another
culture
's
music
but
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, they can feel the message of the
songs
.
This
is the
specialty
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of
music
. It has
their
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its
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own way to connect oodle of communities with each other.
For instance
, Sidhu Mossewala is a Punjabi singer and he
sing
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songs
in
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Punjabi
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punjabi
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the punjabi
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language but we can see on Til-tok and on other musical platforms that
people
love his
songs
from foreign countries as well as they dance
on
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his
songs
. There are enormous examples which
shows
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that
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how unrelated
culture
attached with one another with the help of
music
.
Furthermore
, every masses from every age group love
music
. It is
also
undeniable that the old
songs
are preferred by the grey hair generation whereas, modern
music
is liked by youngsters. But some kind of
songs
that are equally indispensable for all generations plus vanish distance in ages.
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That
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are
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our religious,
petroit
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Detroit
patriot
petrol
songs
.
Such
as, Jan Gan Man is the national anthem of India. Every age group
sung
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this
song with
same
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the same
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enthusiasm. To conclude, some
people
may vary in their point of view but I think,
music
plays
paramount
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a paramount
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role to attach
people
of ages and
culture
with each other because it has their own feeling and language.
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