Some people think it is good for countries culture to show imported foreign films and TV programs. others thing its better to produce them locally discuss both views and give your opinion

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People have
differant
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different
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when it comes to
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the importation
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of foreign movies and
television
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programs. While
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foreign
films
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can have substantial advantages,
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am on the firm
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that
local
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industry can contribute more
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this
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. There are some clear benefits that
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local people can gain through foreign
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.
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, it gives a chance to the viewers to learn about other countries culture, values which can be beneficial for the improvement of knowledge.
Secondly
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, some of the good disciplines can be replicated in developing countries to improve their
life styles
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lifestyles
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. As an example, "Oshin" a
japanese
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Japanese
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television
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series
which
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was aired in the late
90's
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enlighten many
youg
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young
girls not to give up on their dreams if they want to achieve success.
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Finally
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foreign
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could benefit the locals but
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on what the producers
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to
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portray
as well.
On the other hand
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,
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believe
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better to produce movies locally due to
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of reasons.
For instance
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, when producing
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locally it will boom the industry quickly while creating
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of direct and indirect job opportunities, which will help the
countrie's
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country's
countries
economy.
In addition
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to
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, the producers can preserve the native cultural values and ways of living for the future generation, so that they will remain strong in
theire
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their
moral values.
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, locally produced
films
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and
television
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series can improve the
viewers
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intellectual capability to differentiate the good and bad from one another. In conclusion producing and showing locally produced
films
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and
television
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shows not only help the local industry but
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helps the viewers to realize the impact of foreign shows, which outweighs the advantages of the same.
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