Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my interest in the newly updated

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program at your college. Actually, I am a

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student commencing

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lab technician program at Humber

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. I have recently received an update about a

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networking program added to the list for

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interest in networking and my previous course is finishing by the end of

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networking for the upcoming semester. Unfortunately, I do not meet prerequisite requirements which need

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certificate,

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my own. Since

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from a licensed institution. I am unable to apply for

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, I would be grateful if you can help in applying for the course under special conditions.

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, I am prepared to give a mock test for

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applications if it is required. Hope you will consider my request Yours faithfully simar

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