In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?

Since

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ancient times, enforcing

rules

and

regulations

strictly has been a debatable issue. Some consider that nations should adopt

policies

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strictly enforce these laws for juveniles while others believe that flexible

rules

should be implemented.

However

, I strongly agree with the latter statement and will explain why in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with,

implementation

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of laws is necessary as it brings peace to a nation. These

rules

and

regulations

help

adolscents

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adolescents

in the long run of life as they

encouarge

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encourage

them to become extremely considerate for others. To epitomise, if parents would neglect the stealing nature of their offspring, certainly he/she would become robber in future. It not only has

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effect on the respective person

commiting

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committing

crime

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but it

also

generates a sense of fear among

general

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public. Thereby, law-abiding citizens can disrupt the conflict-free environment of a country.

Secondly

, the strict

rules

help to develop various moral skills

such

as punctuality and determination among its citizens. These skills cannot be inherited easily by

grown ups

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because they become habitual to their deeds which are quite tougher to give up at

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mature age.

Thus

, it is necessary to enforce strict

policies

for the better upbringing of

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the young

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generation. For an instance, japan is regarded as a strict nation when it comes to following

rules

and

regulations

.

However

, I found on my recent visit to one of its provinces that people living there are

hard working

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and innovative because of the prevailing strict

policies

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for teenagers. In conclusion, there are different opinions about the enactment of strict

policies

but I strongly believe that uncompromising

rules

help the

adolscents

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adolescents

adolescent

to become sincere citizens and proper

implementaion

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implementation

of

such

regulations

also

helps in developing a peaceful environment for others.