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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is a widely held opinion that becoming extinct in some languages every year is not significant because of the fact that the less there is
language
, the more life will be convenient. I completely disagree with
this
 point for a number of reasons.
To begin
 with, there is a range of social factors against
this
 viewpoint. Primarily,
language
 is connecting
people
 to each other.
That is
, the mother tongue is a pivotal part of societies to be together and be a nation. Equally importantly, speaking the same
language
 represents independent at the same time for nations. Had a society lost their mother tongue, they wouldn’t have been more likely independent where they live. It means that protecting local languages is preserving societies and their values because the communities whose
language
 had been extinct are doomed to perish. Apart from what has been said earlier, cultural reasons are not negligible for
people
. It can be said that
people
 have a variety of cultural heritages and
people
 should protect their
language
 not to break with culture. Many myths have written local tongue and mentioned traditional stories. Put simply, dying out a
language
 causes a decline in diversity culture and cultural heritage in the world. Take Ancient Egypt as an example; there are lots of pyramids and the mystery of pyramids couldn’t be solved by
people
 because their symbols explained what it is aren’t known. In conclusion, the languages are decreasing day by day and
although
 someones believe that
this
 is not significant, I do advocate that there are an array of drawbacks for
people
.
Submitted by Ahmet Münir KOCAMAN on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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