Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is of the companies' general belief that employees should pay more attention to appearances, while others to the proficient at the profession. In my opinion, both views have their necessary and
work
should take them into account tenaciously.
First
of all, the efficiency of the job will determine the success of the company, not the appearances. Since the skills and responsibility in working don't depend on how smart they wear. Some famous organizations like Facebook or Google have a strategy allowing the workers to wear freely. This
idea creates a comfortable production environment that motivates workers to be more productive and improve performance at work
.
On the other hand
, I believe many companies do work
directly with their customers so that the physical outlooks of their staff must be professional. People nearly almost judge someone else toward their basis looking so that first
impression is the most crucial thing. For instance
, sellers are the image of the company and have a big impact on trade prospects. Additionally
, a good clothing-manner will create a great impression on high-ranking managers, colleagues which creates potential in career promotion.
In conclusion, depending on the characteristic of the endeavor
decide the appearance. Dedicating to Change the spelling
endeavour
work
indeed brings various benefits but the outlook of one individual should be regarded properly.Submitted by nganle.ashley on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite