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Some people say that art subjects such as music, drama and creative writing are an essential part of education, and every school should include them in its syllabus. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.

#people #art #subjects #music #drama #part #education #school #syllabus
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 people opine that
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 subjects are so important that schools should include them in their syllabus. I concur with
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 a detailed fashion. The definition of education needs an updated and extended meaning covering adolescents’ interest. After having witnessed several key creative personalities in the
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also
 referred to as “most creative people in the world”, people should supporting and encouraging their kids’ aim of becoming a musician, an actor or a writer/author. If learning arts can be included in
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 syllabus teachers and parents are able to discover the extent of their child’s potential towards learning an
artform
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. While it is important to focus on a child’s academic results, utmost care is to be provided to their interests in art forms. Every child is special and every kid has a unique quality
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 makes them outstanding and different from others. Notably, few youngsters show remarkable progress in their academics while
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 of them possess
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talent
 and are more inclined towards their interests in different artforms. It is worth
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 that these form part of
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 curriculum so one can identify their own unique
talent
. Children with artistic skills are required to be supported so that they can work towards scaling up their level and hone their skills.
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 require a lot of effort and often tend to deviate one from academic performance, there are quite a few examples
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evidences
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 that true
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 hearts. Musicians, actors and creative writers earn a lot of fame and highly regarded as celebrities when they do well. While it is important for a kid to acquire
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 education, learning arts needs to be a significant part of institutional learning. To conclude, I side with the opinion that art forms are to be included as
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 section of the educational program which will not only enable kindergartners to identify their inner
talent
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 help in shaping their future
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