Universities and colleges are now offering qualifactions through distance learning from the internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Online learning is currently
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major method of teaching class for universities and colleges. While there are
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restrictions regarding the virtual studying environment, I do believe that online learning is the most effective way to maintain the balance where
students
could not only keep learning but overcome the pandemic at the same time. The most valuable strength of studying at home is to reduce the spread of COVID-19. As the disease has been intrusively taken away
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of people's lives, it is our duty to practice social distance and make efforts to bring
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society back to normal.
Besides
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social responsibility, online courses provide the flexibility that allows faculties and
students
to arrange their time schedule
accordingly
. Meanwhile, no matter how the class format changes, the primary function of education is to acquire
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. Learning from the internet
also
empower learners to access
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a wide range of qualified subjects.
However
, the virtual format indeed
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shortages.
For instance
, one of the most effective learning methods is to learn from peers by completing group projects. Because of the difficulties of meeting each other in person, communication is becoming the key challenge for teammates to brainstorm together. Another disadvantage is the
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participation of
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space. Fields,
such
as engineering and design, always require
students
to perform experiments and gather information from target audiences. The lack of mobility during quarantine prevents
students
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research studies. In conclusion,
although
online learning causes less connection with classmates,
students
are still able
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study
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the same material through the internet. Most importantly, learning
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home
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us to avoid the
further
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increment
of infected cases of COVID.
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