The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the most common means of

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is the car. In great parts of the world, the situation has escalated to the point that the number of vehicles on the road is not sustainable anymore.

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, I agree that encouragement and

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over

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issue should be implemented both at a national and international level. In the next

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because

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forms

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of

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can be more expensive than traditional ones.

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may be true, it is a weak argument if we consider State

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. Indeed, often the government incentives these choices by making these options cheaper and more accessible for the citizens. In

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sense, I agree that the

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of

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forms

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of

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should be encouraged.

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,

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require a huge amount of oil, which is a non-renewable source of energy.

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, the more

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, the more oil is needed. As a matter of fact, maintaining oil as the principal energy source is not a sustainable option.

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, many studies demonstrate the link between the

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of non-renewable sources and the worsening of environmental-related issues,

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as climate change. Since many people are often not fully aware of the environmental consequences of their actions, the only way to improve the situation regarding the

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of

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is to implement public policies to keep

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issue under

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.

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, a solution to these problems can be to encourage the

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of

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forms

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of

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and to better

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the spread of

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by introducing stricter rules. In conclusion, the high volume of

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on the roads is not sustainable anymore and

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the major consequences of

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issue are burdening the environment in many ways. Bearing

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in mind, it is essential that the government encourages

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forms

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of

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and that national and international laws are implemented to

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problem.