Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays some people argued that we are spending too much time and resources on protecting the

habitats

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of wildlife. I strongly disagree with the view and the two main reasons will be illustrated in the following paragraphs.

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of all, we have the responsibility to help wild species to rebuild their homes because human activities are the major factor in the destruction of wildlife

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.

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, some endangered

animals

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will lose their home and their life.

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, as we are producing a large amount of marine debris by using plastics

such

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as plastic bags, all species of sea turtle are suffering by eating them, which causes blockage in their intestines. The earth

is not only belong

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to human-beings and so all

animals

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have

right

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to live

in

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on

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the planet.

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, we must devote much time and money to conserve the homes of wild

animals

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.

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, it is no doubt we spend much time and money on protecting wild species, but

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is not

waste

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of recourses.

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, we are on the right track if more and more people pay attention to

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sever issue.

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is because it demonstrates human still kept humanity and morality.

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, the resources we are applying is not only protecting wildlife

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but

also

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saving our own home. If we don’t take any actions, now we are destroying

animal’s

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an animal’s

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living environment but in the near future, there is no suitable place for us

o live

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olive

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. At that point, will you still think we put too

much

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many

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efforts

on

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into

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preserving

animals

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habitats

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?

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, we should work harder to protect wild

animals

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and birds. To conclude, we should continue to contribute more to save

animals

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’ land because we are the one destroyed their

habitats

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and we need to take the responsibility to rebuild their homes.

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,

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is not wasting resources.