When cars and cyclists use the same roads, there are often problems. Why is this the case? What are the solutions?

The number of vehicles
are
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drastically increasing in
this
modern world.It is often happening accidents in the
road
due to
overtraffic
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over traffic
,
This
essay will discuss the main reasons and solution to avoid the problems in the
road
The main reason because problems happening in the
road
,
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when they drive both 4
wheeles
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wheelers
wheels
and 2 wheelers in the same path.The person who
drive
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the
car
,
he
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always
drive
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drives
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in
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at
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minimum
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speed of 80km/hour,he would always give special attention to the other
vehcles
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vehicles
in
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on
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the
road
.The
car
driver may not give attention to
cyclist
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the cyclist
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.Sometimes the
cyclist
perhaps
try
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to cross the roads or they may ride the cycle in the middle of the
road
.
However
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the
car
driver may not
be predict
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in the middle of the
road
one
cyclist
will appear.
Therefore
the person who drives the
car
suddenly will try to protect the
cyclist
and will give a sudden break.
Still
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in some
cases
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the
car
wil
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will
hit the cycle and
ther
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there
they
will be major accidents but sometimes there will not be severe issues as well.These
problmes
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problems
are most common in
our
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both urban and rural areas. To solve
this
issue,
firstly
the government has to take initiative to divide the
road
specially
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for the cyclists and
pedestrains
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pedestrians
.The developed
countires
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countries
already have
this
fecility
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facility
.The size of the
road
must be increased as well as there should be enough dividers.The side of the
road
is specially dedicated
for
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the
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cyclists.Not only that but
also
the cyclists should be aware of rules,
specially
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while crossing the roads,they have to cross only in the zebra lines,if they do not follow the rule,they should be punished by the police authority.
Moreover
,the driving speed has to reduced by the
car
drivers,Overspeed must be charged by the traffic police.The crowded areas should have
speed
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limit for the
four wheelers
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four-wheelers
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.
Furthermore
,
road
signals are crucial in
the
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highways and rural areas.All the above solution will help our nation to protect our population from the major traffic accidents happening in the lane. To conclude,
every
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problems
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problem
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there will be solutions.The people have to be more alert when they go out of their home.Every individual has their loved ones are
watiting
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waiting
for them to be back in their home safely.To avoid any
furhter
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further
issues,
evey
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every
person has to
be follow
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the
road
traffic rules.It will help to avoid major issues
in
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the
road
.
In addition
to that, people can happily with their family for
long
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time
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