You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing regarding the seminar about digitalization in marketing advertised on your website. I wonder if I could ask you about some details.

Firstly

, I have seen different price ranges depending on the participation options. Honestly, the full package with accommodation is more interesting for me because I live in another country and I will not be able to spend time commuting for two days. Could you send me the information about the hotel for participants and

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Secondly

, I did not clearly understand the schedule and the speakers of the workshop. Will they speak about their experience and is it a more theoretical seminar or it includes work in groups on our own projects? I would be grateful if you could send me information about it.

In addition

, could you possibly let me know which dates are open for registration? Thank you in advance for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Rose Green

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