Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In many parts of the world nowadays we can notice the increasing science and technologies which extends our soul for significant years. It can be commonly seen in developed countries
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as the USA, Japan and etc. I completely agree with
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opinion that there is no better time to be alive than now.
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will be proven by analyzing the inability of technologies that can give to patients only physical conditions and their incapabilities for some people because each person's life already has written by God in our fate.
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of all, it must be recognized that up to date automation are not able to give moral support to the- person whom they are healing.
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is evidenced by the experiment based on extending a person's activity for 8-10 years which were failed because there was a lack of additional ingredients which never will be apparent when they apply
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test.
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example makes it clear that we should appreciate our alive moment here and now.
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, it must be concluded that science and equipment cannot completely give us a healthy being.
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, the Almighty had written, as well as, knew when we will die.
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, we are not able to escape from our destiny. Michael Jackson did make-up and used machinery to make himself younger.
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, despite these deeds, death took him in his 50 years anyway play a good example here. When looking at
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example, it is obvious that we will stay anyway in the end with
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decision: there is no better time to be alive than now. Overall, I think the most important thing is to manage and turn our lives to the good side
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of spending effort on extending our life. To summarize, after analyzing the above, it must be concluded that none of the things made by people can help people to avoid his circumstance. For these reasons I sometimes feel ambivalence.
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,it is my hope that a one-day community who wants to extend their life will understand that they are fooling themselves.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Life expectancy
  • Medical advancements
  • Innovations
  • Quality of life
  • Transportation
  • Agricultural developments
  • Food security
  • Educational reforms
  • Cybersecurity
  • Privacy concerns
  • Automation
  • Environmental concerns
  • Climate change
  • International cooperation
  • Developed and developing countries
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