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Today, We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used for in future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?

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Nowadays,
computer
systems
 are becoming popular.
This
 new technology caused people to lean on it with most of their daily life activities. In the near future, computers are expected to be more advanced enough to be applied to other industries
such
 as agriculture.
However
, being too dependent on it will cause some downfall to society. Over the
next
 few years, we can predict that
computer
 technology can be implemented in agriculture.
In particular
, robotics are
computer
-driven devices, which can be utilized in farming. Obviously, growing crops is a tedious and meticulous process. but by using robots, farmers can just work inside their homes while remotely controlling these machines. As an example, greenhouses are now partly
computer
 operated. Areas inside the greenhouse that does not have enough sunlight are being provided by sunshine by remotely opening areas of the roof. Artificial Intelligence detects those shaded areas and
then
 intervenes. Clearly,
computer
systems
 are beneficial to people and we need to depend on them now. Technology is evolving at a fast pace, that somehow human beings can not do it by themselves. There is a high demand in the production of goods, which only smart machinery is capable to supply. We can see
this
 in factories with machines that are
computer
 operated.
For example
 in making nanotechnology, only computers are capable to produce
this
.
However
, dependency on
computer
systems
 can have its drawbacks, like in health. People may get used to letting computers do physical work, that most of them will have a sedentary lifestyle. Persons who control these devices usually just sit on a chair with a monitor and keyboard, which in time can cause health problems in vision and their cardiac system. In conclusion,
although
computer
systems
 can provide great help to a person now and in the future, by making labour much easier. Being too dependable with these
systems
 may cause health problems, that in my opinion is far greater of a concern.
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