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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city.

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I’ve got news about moving to our gorgeous city and I'll be glad to see you soon. I'll be so excited to tell you about many stunning places. The
first
 thing I want to throw at you what fund are you ready to spend on living here? Here are many different places to stay.
For example
, a couple of cute mini-hotels in the suburbs or you can stay in my grandmother’s flat that locates opposite the picturesque lake near the centre. You'll be over the moon when you get the
first
 trip on our modern subway. Stations located all over the city, but if it’s necessary to go to the suburbs, sadly, you should take a bus. Recently, I met a girlfriend in one of our big attractive parks. I would recommend that place for meeting new friends.
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