Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. To what extent is this a postive or negative trend?

The majority of

food

that

are

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available in some

industralised

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industrialised

industrialized

nations are imported from different

countries

.

This

trend has a negative impact on the agriculture sector of

imported

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countries

. It is believed that providing a superior range of

food

to citizens by importing from other nations is highly important because it means that it enables the government to focus its effort on the production and manufacturing in other sectors.

This

is because the concentration on producing the products that

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more demand in other parts of the world would generate immense profits to the income of the country by meeting the international demand.

As a result

, it would effectively fuel the

economy

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cycle because exporting goods,

particulary

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particularly

electronic and oil would lead to more profits than exporting

food

products.

On the other hand

, I would go against

this

view because relying on other

countries

'

food

production would affect negatively the performance of agriculture.

This

trend would cause a collective migration from

this

sector to others because the government has been neglecting the importance of supporting and encouraging the farmers in producing local

food

,

such

as fruit, vegetable, and livestock. One of the

devestating

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devastating

impacts of

this

movement is that if other

countries

stopped exporting their own

food

to their neighbours,

this

would create a steep

food

shortage in the

imported

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countries

. To sum up,

Although

importing

food

products from other

countries

would help

country

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to

concetrate

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concentrate

on other important industries, I would disagree

this

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statement because

this

trend might have a dreadful impact on the growth of

farming

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the farming

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sector, and

therefore

, it would prevent people from getting access to

food

if other parts of

world

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refuse to export their own harvest.