Children in some parts of the world have less responsibility compared to children in the past. Some people think as a positive change, however, others think of it as a negative. What do you think?
In the modern world, parents tend not to involve their
children
in taking responsibilities. While some people
opines
that Change the verb form
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it
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they
have
some affirmative effects, others think the opposite. In my opinion, I think it would have some adverse effects on the young generation.
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To begin
with, if a child is brought up in a less responsible manner, it would have negative implications in their personality and later it would become hard for them to change it by the time they realise. Therefore
, giving more responsibilties
would enhance their self ability to face and tackle challenges that they have to face Correct your spelling
responsibilities
it
in their life. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For example
, the young individuals in western countries starts
earning at a very young Change the verb form
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age
to have their own pocket money for their needs which creates an inspiration to grow whereas young people
in countries like India tend to leave their parents only by the age
of thirty. As a result
, parents have to take initiative to make their children
responsible.
Secondly
, young people
are more immature than the children
in the past and this
would eventually affect their decision making
capacity in a bad wayAdd a hyphen
decision-making
,
because they would struggle at the time of taking important decisions where they have to take risks in life. Remove the comma
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Consequently
, it would affect their mental health as well when they come across difficult situations. For instance
, people
who had taken over the family businesses find it impossible to manage such
a huge responsibilty
in most of the situations, so in these Correct your spelling
responsibility
cases
they should have given and learnt about it at an early Add a comma
,cases
age
. One of the finest example
is the case of Kingfisher, where Vijay Mallya had to sell all his properties because his son could not manage the whole entity by himself. Change to a plural noun
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As a result
, his empire got bankrupted and he had to leave the country.
In conclusion, I believe, in the past, duties were given at the age
of adolescence which were not only businesses but also
household chores and in addition
, this
could have helped to avoid lots of problems which are seen in the new generation, so I would like to recommend government
to introduce new job programs where Add an article
the government
children
could do at an early age
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