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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Recycling is the best way to save products coming from nature by reusing them. Near the houses, different containers are placed to sort out the waste from homes
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 and ease the load when in factories they will be recreated. Unfortunately, most of the population not involved in process of recycling.
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, the
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 is intended to make a legal requirement for
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 to recycle. The
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 about reusing household goods will require
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 to discipline themselves to waste sorting. In my opinion, if laws will be stated by penalty, a lot of
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 will try to avoid paying extra money,
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 they will start recycling. Nowadays, mostly plastic bottles are reused, so
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 separate only them, while the
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 bags, paper, or even accumulators are messed up in one trashcan not allowing
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 to convert them. For that reason, if the
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 will require
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 to sort every single home waste many products could be used again saving natural resources. Some non-governmental companies are already processing wastes and recycle them from their budget. If the
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 will encourage that kind of organization and point it in the
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, many
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 will be aware of
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 follow them. For the
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 of encouraging the new group of
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 for accomplishing
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, making a deal with existed companies would be easier and faster. In that way, more
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 will know about recycling and
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 who organize that, so
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 will be motivated in the separation of wastes. To sum up, to increase recycling, the
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 should make laws where if
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 do not follow it they will pay fine. Mainly, the legal requirement should be all about encouraging
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 to be involved in reusing, so
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 and other organizations should propagate recycling.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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