discuss about your favorite singer. how do you know him, what this person is like and do you think he is good?

Nowadays, singing is a vibrant profession as it plays a vital role in everybody's amusement. There are a plethora of singers who are famous in our country. Today I would like to talk about Diljeet Dosanjh who is my favourite singer. I know him because an eminent personality in India and he has sung numerous hit Punjabi
songs
. He is one of the leading
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in
Punjabi
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music industry. He has got many talents. He is not only a singer but he is
also
a brilliant actor and a songwriter. He has acted in various superhit Hindi and Punjabi movies. I believe he is a noble person as well because despite being a renowned musician he remains down to earth. He is humble and treats the audience and people nicely. Apart from
this
, he is a philanthropist. He helps the poor and needy people. Even he donates a significant part of his income to charity. His voice is amazing and whenever I hear his
songs
I feel jubilant,
therefore
in my downtime, I prefer to hear his
songs
for amusement as well as to relieve stress. I
also
listen to his
songs
while travelling. He is well-known for his outstanding performances. He was inclined towards music from a young age and used to sing in Gurdwaras. Slowly he started stage shows and it was that he got noticed. Due to his melodious
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he has become an elite artist in India. Folks especially head to his concerts to listen to him live.
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