Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home, and more children will study from home, as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this will be a positive or negative deuelopment?

In recent times, computer technology

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become increasingly popular, and

also

likely more affordable and accessible

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, it is suggested that adults would be able to

work

, and the

children

would be able to study from

home

. I think

this

is a positive development because it enables both parties to

work

and study in a relaxed environment. Technology has made our lives considerably easier due to

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efficiency and constant upgrades. With technologies becoming cheaper and accessible, jobs and education would easier to achieve.

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, due to the ongoing corona pandemic changes had to be made in our everyday lives and that included adults working from

home

and

children

attending classes online. Of

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it was a big change from the usual but after some months of adapting to the new normal, more companies are beginning to offer some of their

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the opportunity to choose where they

work

from. The same applied to students as parents had the opportunity to observe and make inputs on how their

children

learn.

Secondly

, if

this

becomes a reality, it would provide the opportunity of bonding of parents and their wards because

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the parents normally spend considerable amounts of time away for

work

, they tend to moss out on their

children

's milestones.

Therefore

, working from

home

can provide

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to the afore-mentioned issue. In conclusion, technology has become our saviour in many ways because of the new opportunities that are associated with

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use. I am of the opinion that the advantages of working and schooling from

home

would influence our society positively.