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Some people think that economic development is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Others argue that economic development is damaging the environment and needs to stop. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

#people #development #world #poverty #hunger #environment
economic
developement
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development
 is necessary for the country development.but
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 disagree with the statement that it is a way to end poverty.
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 agree with the statement that it is causing huge damage to the vast amount
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resources available in the country. to start with,it mainly includes industrialization(building factories to overcome the general needs of
people
).but they are using them as a key to produce money from general
people
.consider an example introducing robots in factories,because it can do
large
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 and accurate amount of work when compared with humans.so it is causing so much damage to a
middle class
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 person who needs to work daily to meet their daily needs. to support
this
,industries are causing so many
envirmental
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environmental
 problems
such
 as water,air,land pollutions and much more on the list.
for example
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chemicals released by them into water and air are causing danger to both humans and other kinds of habitat animals(including birds).take an incident of
bhopal
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tradegy
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tragedy
 where so many
people
 died to release
of
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harmful gas into the air. to conclude that,
inorder
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in order
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 to overcome poverty authorities
needs
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 to step forward by including some jobs in the industries,in that way some
people
 will get daily wages to feed their families.some are born with poverty,government and society needs to help them to outcome
this
 problem.to get rid of
encironmental
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environmental
 problems government needs to
make
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take
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 strict actions
on
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against
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 industrialists who
breaks
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 terms and conditions.
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