The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

in the contemporary world the society witness obesity, which is gathering momentum.

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ten years, the number of overweight youngsters

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raised

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by 20 per cent. in

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am planning to find out the roots of

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phenomenon and look into what consequences to us

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suppose that there are several factors, which influence on developing obesity among young people.

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first

of all, it is dedicating

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more fast

food

resturants

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restaurants

such

as

macdonalds

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MacDonalds

Macdonalds

,

kfc

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KFC

, burger king, pizza hut. these

resturants

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restaurants

try to give hard sells to people, placing adverts

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their products

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the web and tv. children are more exposed

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it than adults, as they

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don't

have enough

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to analyse it well and make their own decision.

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, if a famous

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promotes burgers,which

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MacDonalds

sell,

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increases the chance of buying their products by children. another reason is processed

food

. most children are lazy,

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do not want to spend their free time

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cooking as it is simpler and faster to go to the nearest shop and buy some

food

, which can be heated in a microwave.

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, they can buy frozen pizza and get it

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unfrozen

after few minutes in a microwave.

however

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obesity, our society can face awful consequences. the

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effect is cancer, as the overeating of

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type of

food

can entail

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horrible disease.

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of future generation can decrease.

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, if you eat in fast

food

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restaurants

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long period of time, you could die faster. in the conclusion,

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would like to state that overweighting is indeed one of the gravest threat, facing the modern world. when we visit fast

food

resturants

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restaurants

or buy frozen

food

, we should bear in mind that it can be a cause of our death