The growth of the online shopping one day closure to shopping stores in cities. Do you agree or disagree with this.

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IN MODERN TIMES, THE ISSUE OF EFFECT OF ONLİNE SHOPPING HAS HIGHLY CONTROVERSIAL. THERE ARE THOSE WHO SAY THAT MALL STORES WOULD BE CLOSE

YEARS BECAUSE OF CASE OF THES ONLINE SHOPPING ,

HOWEVER

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OTHERS BELIEVE THAT THEY SHOULD BE NOT. IN

THIS

ESSAY I WILL EXAMINE BOTH SIDES OF THE ARGUMENT AND PROVIDE MY OVERALL OPINION. GENERALLY SPEAKING, THERE IS A WIDE RANGE OF REASONS WHY PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT FOLK JUST SHOULD BUY GOODS ON THE ONLİNE APPLICATION

SUCH

AS FACEBOOK

INSTEAD

OF LOCAL WORKPLACE. PERHAPS THE MAIN REASON WHY PEOPLE ARE IN FAVOUR OF

THIS

IDEA IS BECAUSE

THIS

TYPE OF BUYING THINGS WANTING FOR BUSY PERSON IS QUITE EASILY. A GOOD ILLUSTRATION OF

THIS

THAT HUMAN WORKING IN ANOTHER JOB SHOULD BE SPEND TIME FOR SEARCHING THINGS , WHICH IS WANTED BY HIM.

AS A RESULT

, BY SPENDING LESS TIME, THEY SHOULD HAVE MORE AND MORE FREE DAYS . IF WE USE ONLINE SHOPPING APPLICATION TO BUY THINGS

SUCH

AS PHONE, T-SHIRT, JACKET, ETC. , WE HAVE A LOT OF LEISURE TO DEVELOP OURSELVES. DESPITE THESE ARGUMENTS, THERE IS

ALSO

A CASE FOR THE IDEA THAT STORE shopping centre IN THE CITIES , ESPECIALLY ON THE TOWN , SHOULD BE CLOSED

YEARS DESPITE

THIS

GROWTH OF ONLINE SHOPPING GO AHEAD. PERHAPS THE MAIN REASON WHY NATION THINK THAT

THIS

IDEA IS that CLOTHES BUYING AS ONLINE COULD BE NOT TRIED BY PERSONS.

FOR EXAMPLE

ALTHOUGH

WE KNOW INFO ABOUT THE OUR BODY, WE SHOULD SELECT WRONGLY IT ON THE ONLINE SHOPPING plaza

SUCH

AS COLOMBIA , WHİCH İS SO BIG FIRM ABOUT WINTER CLOTHES.

AS A RESULT

, DESPITE NUMBERS OF ONLINE SHOPPING shopping centre SITES INCREASE RAPIDLY NOWADAYS, LOCAL SHOPS WILL NOT FINISHED COMPLETELY

day. IF WE GO TO SHOPS ON OUR TOWN , WE SHOULD BE SUPPORT THESE WORKERS AND BUSINESSPERSON IN THESE PLACE. IN CONCLUSION ,

THIS

IS A TOPIC WHICH IS VERY RELEVANT TO MODERN SOCIETY. MY PERSONAL VIEW IS THAT BOTH ONLINE WORKSHOP AND LOCAL STORES WILL NOT CLOSED BECAUSE OF DEMAND. IF A STORE MARKET THEIR PRODUCT IN BOTH ONLINE AND NON-ONLINE, THEY SHOULD BE VERY BIG FIRM THAN PAST DAYS.

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Many people think that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while other argue that the aid money is misspent by governments that recieve it, so the international aid should not be given to the poor countries in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?