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exhausted water resouces from many countries. Discuss this opinion and give your solutions

#water #resouces #countries
As we know , Earth consists of 30
%
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 land and the remaining 70% is filled up with
water
.
However
, at present, the natural
water
 bodies have been in the depletion phase. In
this
 essay, we will discuss the possible factors for
this
 cause and suggests the necessary solutions. It is an undeniable fact that
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 the population on
this
 planet has taken a huge spike. And, many homes were being built to have a shelter and more infrastructure comes into play to commute to various places.
This
 was done with the help of cutting-edge technology, which was playing a huge role in
this
 modern era. So, to construct
this
 kind of civil structures, natural resources like ponds and lakes were used, as there is less availability of land, and more trees were depleted, which stops the percolation of
water
 into the ground. Not only one country, but every nation faces the same problem.
Besides
, there are some steps to eradicate
this
 condition.
Firstly
, one has to construct earth-pits while building the houses, which makes
water
 pass to the ground level.
Besides
, there should be an increase in the afforestation methods too.
For example
, Govt. of Telangana, India has taken a step forward and started the 'Haritha Haram' programme, with the scope of plantling one acre of samplings each year. By following these measures, the depleted resources come into their original stage. To sum up, it is in the light of the discussion, I can say that mankind is the primary reason for the decline of
water
 and can follow the possible steps as defined above to come across
this
 kind of situations.
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