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Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Technology revolutionized our lives in a variety of fields including education over the past decades. Truckloads of academic institutes are now allowing their
students
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 to attend e-
classes
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 online. Remote
classes
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, indeed, benefit a lot but I personally believe that on-campus
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 cannot be substituted. Admittedly, e-learning permits convenience to
students
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 who have limited access to the campus,
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oversea
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. In most cases, online courses fulfil the educational objects. International
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 might have limited language skills in the local environment, and taking remote
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 obviously is an ideal option for them to achieve their graduation goal. E-
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 not only help those who are not familiar with the language
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 but
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 allow people to review the
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 repetitively, and improve the learning efficiency.
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, the video of the class through
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 could be recorded and
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 the lecturer may not be accessible. One of the vital importance advantages of onsite
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 is that pupils can have instant feedback for their questions. Some subjects are theoretical, and the content could lead to misunderstanding.
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 will not be able to absorb the knowledge once there is an impediment occurs during his or her studying. In
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 answer could resolve the problems that are obstacles for the pupil who are attending in the classroom. Online study has given up
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 a tremendous advantage of in campus courses, and leave those impediments that are not getting resolved immediately alone. In conclusion,
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 distance learning by networking has benefits
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 as overcoming xenophobia, the disadvantage would be given up the goodness of the onsite
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 that can resolve
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’ problems instantly and,
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, the advantages cannot outweigh the disadvantages

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unparalleled flexibility
  • democratizes education
  • geographically isolated
  • personal circumstances
  • cost-effectiveness
  • accommodation
  • commuting
  • self-motivated learning
  • self-discipline
  • time management
  • direct interaction
  • feelings of isolation
  • quality and recognition
  • inferior
  • technical issues
  • digital divide
  • reliable technology
  • underprivileged
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