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The government’s investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Public budgeting is often a contentious topic. Some
people
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 do not see the value of
arts
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, music and theatres and consider the
investment
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 in these areas not worthy when compared to public services. I strongly disagree with
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 opinion.
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 of all, quite the contrary of waste of money, investing in
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 can generate huge economic returns to the local community.
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investment
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 can boost the whole creative industry. When an industry is developed, new jobs are created, and income can be increased for those who work in
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 industry. London is a good example, which benefits from its theatres and musical productions. Not only has the theatric business made handsome profits
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 the local government has
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 benefited from the tax revenue.
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, these artistic
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 themselves have become tourism attractions, drawing millions of
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to
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 and thereby adding extra income to the local economy.
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, investing in
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arts
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 is obviously worthwhile.
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 to money,
arts
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 venues will
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 bring about other sorts of returns. These
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 help to form an environment of creativity and aesthetics. Within
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 environment, young
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 will be cultivated and educated to become useful skilled professionals.
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, when exposed to fine paintings, young
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 can be inspired to appreciate graphics and
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 pallets and eventually become designers, who will work and contribute to various sectors including advertising and industrial product design. Without these
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, it is unimaginable where these young
people
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 can gain their motivations.
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, from the aspect of education,
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facilities
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 are far more important than they may seem to be. To conclude,
investment
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 in
arts
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 have both economical and educational purpose. It is not wise to withdraw these investments even though public services are needed. Governments should resort to
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 of money
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 of cutting
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the budget
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 deemed for
arts
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.
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