Today more and more tourists are visiting places where the conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert and the Antarctic. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the tourist who visit such places.

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to places that have difficult conditions now has been becoming a trend for many communities. That brings advantages but

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disadvantages. When the crowd starts to have interested in those spots like deserts or poles, more society will start to exploit those areas, which helps the population know more about the beautiful stories. That inspired many movie directors to create many blockbuster movies. Countries that owned those districts will attract more tourists, and the economy will grow better. Everything has its dark side; more tourism wants to discover those fields, more people will plunder those wild animals like camels, they will become a thing for humans taking tons of pictures to post on social media. They need to live a life

that is

not supposed to be, which makes their longevity shorter. The exigency of the nation to discover a new corner are the things that we can not stop but know how to treat nature, and the wild animals in the right ways are what we need to do.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where the conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert and the Antarctic. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the tourist who visit such places.

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Students should choose a university major that prepares them as high paying careers. To what extent do you agree with this statement.

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