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In the past, most people spend their entire career working for one company, whereas people nowadays move from one job to another. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each? Which do you think is better? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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People
 like to
work
 in an environment which is
condusive
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conducive
 to them. Job satisfaction depends on various factors like time, money, proximity.
Hence
,
people
 switch from
one
company
 to another, if they are unsatisfied.
This
 essay will focus on
pros
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 and cons of staying at
one
 organisation throughout or shifting to different companies. There are some
people
 who thrive for success who prefer money over stability. Mostly,
this
 habit is visible when a person
start
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 their career. Because
this
 age group consist of young individuals, they have the stamina and greed to achieve what they want.
For example
, a
sales person
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salesperson
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 will prefer going to a
company
who
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that
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 offers
a
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higher pay, as the
work
 environment is similar. Since they move
one
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from one
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 place to another, getting a higher incentive will only be profitable.
However
,
this
 can be a downfall if the long run, as the person does not have much stability and can be tiring to start from
the
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scratch. Meanwhile, there exist a group of
people
 who have worked their whole working career in a
company
.
Although
,
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this
 does not give much exposure in the industry, it definitely creates a stable relationship with other employees.
For instance
, my mother worked 24 years in
one
company
 till she retired. The
company
 was her
second
 home and the
work
 environment mattered, not the income; as it was sufficient.
Such
 examples, foster dedication and commitment, which in turn, helps to create a positive aura in the organisation. To conclude, I would rather select a
work place
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workplace
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 which meets my criteria and stay, rather than changing jobs. At times, it is important to choose happiness and satisfaction rather than choosing monetary gains.
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