many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the cause of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
Illegal
persons
who come from jail do evil deeds more. The main reason is not to accept easily
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them easily
solution
is to take care of them properly in the tribes. Correct article usage
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for
this
epidemic and proposed some preventive actions to avoid this
problem.
The main problem caused by criminals crime activists getting furstration
of their lives. No one Correct your spelling
frustration
count
that type of evil Change the verb form
counts
persons
as well. Thus
, Getting no honour in the
society they engage themselves in Correct article usage
apply
the
criminal activities again. Correct article usage
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In addition
, bad folks who released from jail cannot be able to imbrue theselves
in the Correct your spelling
themselves
tasks
. The possible solution is that there must be arranged for rehabilitation for them. For instance
, if a person get
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tasks
again and if they can comprehend about
the necessity of good works it will be fruitful for the country.
What is more, a lot of studies state that criminals Change preposition
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his
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he
get released from Correct pronoun usage
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the
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Moreover
, most of
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the
people cannot keep any trust Correct article usage
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that evil Change preposition
in
persons
if they do the wrong tasks
again. The preventive action is that folks has
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have
For example
, giving tasks
to the evil persons
can provide encourages which convert them into a good man.
In conclusion, keeping no faith is tha
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