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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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Different
languages
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 which have been used in our life die out every year. Some
people
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 believe that even if there are a small number of
languages
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 exist in the world, life would be easier. I
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 agree that
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 of
languages
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 does not affect humans.
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 every state has its own
language
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 to communicate with each other,
people
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 focus on an international
language
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 to develop global networking-called Globalization.
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, English has become a popular
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languages
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 all over the earth for making contact with other nations.
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, using several speeches among the different countries, making communication would be uncomfortable due to fewer knowledge of other states’
languages
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. So, I think
people
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 are more comfortable using a unique one for communicating with the
people
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 of other nations. Learning various
languages
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 for a person is a difficult and time-consuming task. For
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 reason, one should learn a common speech
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 worldwide acceptable.
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, different states of India has an individual
language
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, but the Indian government declared that as the official purposes everyone must follow the English
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.
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, every school’s authorities design their curriculum with compulsory English
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.
On the other hand
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, China only concentrates on their own mother tongue resulting in
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the chines
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 are not able to make contact with the other person who lives in another country.
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 why
,
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 I believe that die out of some
languages
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 is not necessary because life simpler using fewer
languages
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 in the world. In conclusion, in
this
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 globalization era, everybody should focus on a unique
language
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 to make global networking. Dying out of some
languages
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 does not make any harm in the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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