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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#communications #it’s #letters
Every new invention has its own rising and downfall. Many
believes
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 that using a pen and
papers
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 for writing a
letter
 is an old-school thought in
this
 modern age era. Whereas, I strongly do not agree with the above-mentioned statement, which I am going to discuss in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, the
letter
 will only prove to be an original document when it is in hard copy than sending via
internet
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. Having said that, today it become a piece of cake for anyone to type
a fake letters
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 for them to prove as it is
a
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real
papers
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.
This
 leads to
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 a habit of stealing an opportunity from an eligible candidate. To exemplify,
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 past two decades many
student
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 were alleged to submit a fake recommendation
letter
 to multinational companies to grab a highly paid job from the original employee.
There for
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, it is mandatory to have an old technique of
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hand written
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 letters to stop
such
 activity.
Furthermore
,
however
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 today’s
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world
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word
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world
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 turn into
the
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modern society but can’t beat
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certain facts. When we know that
such
 letters can get tampered
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 university and at a job level by random
candidate
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, it can
also
 misuse at
higher
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 ground like
a
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government discreet information.
Moreover
, today is the world of hackers and most of them are in negative hacking, which rather
open
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 more scope for criminal activity.
For example
, it
was reportedly misuse
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 by
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a hacker
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hacker
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 to obtain
an
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info from
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 website and sell it to the
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 country and compromised his homeland security.
Hence
, here, we can’t deny
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the fact of having a
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 of
a
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hand written
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 or stamped documents. To conclude, it is easy to run toward a modern marvel and fast way of communication but
sometime
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such
 old techniques only help the society from
such
 dangers. According to me, it is necessary to have
an
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online communication but a
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hand written
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letter
 will always prove its originality
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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