Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that the way that consumers buy has changed significantly over the

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shopping has become extremely interesting for both consumers and sellers.

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and cons of

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new commercial strategy and explain why I believe that the advantages of online shopping are outweighed by its negatives when it comes to convenience. One disadvantage is online shopping is less safe.

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is because

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are exposed to cyber attacks as they are asked for their personal information while doing the payment steps.

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can be unsafe as criminals build fake stores aiming to collect personal data. To illustrate,

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month with

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of Aleatory, a casual-clothes store, when hackers stole their money from their bank account. What’s more, clothes and shoes buyers cannot wear items that they are looking at on the screen to try if it fits and suits them. The chance of choosing the wrong size or an uncomfortable piece is huge. One advantage is that it is tremendously convenient to use the

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to shop

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items

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as electronic devices and appliances. The reason for

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users can save money by comparing price tags among online stores, checking which one has the lower cost just in a few minutes.

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, companies can expose a larger variety of goods and services in the clouds, when it is compared to a concrete built store.

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, there is time flexibility for shopping on the

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can browse at any time, 24 hours per day, seven days a week, independent of commercial hours.

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amplifies not only the types of

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the consumers’ options, increasing sales and being convenient to

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. In conclusion, I think the advantages of the technological option outweigh the disadvantages in reason by its time convenience and likeliness to do a more suitable and affordable buying.