Some people say that history can teach us many important values and lessons, but others think it is unnecessary to learn from the past. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is suggested that

history

can educate us on values and lessons even though others think

that is

is it is useless to learn from the past. In my opinion,I believe that

history

is essential for understanding past events and the preservation of culture

although

it could quite boring, voluminous and lacks some importance in today's world. On one hand,

history

has become beneficial to many

people

.

For instance

, many

people

have relied on

history

to provide information about past happenings,

such

as the world war, slave trade, the fight for women's rights but most importantly ti understand various cultures and languages that have become extinct. To illustrate

this

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would give an example, recently there has been a lot of excavation of the tombs of dead

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of

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ancient Egypt.

History

has enabled historian and

archeologists

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understand

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the purposes of the burial rites performed on the mummies but most importantly get

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understanding of the earliest civilisation that happened in Africa. By finding

this

important information, a lot of questions have been answered regarding past cultures and traditions and

also

understanding the markings, drawings or writings on the tombs.

On the other hand

,

history

has become distorted in many ways due to certain reasons

such

as; tampering of

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to suit a personal narrative.

For example

, slavery and how it began have been altered tremendously in various historical books to suit absurd religious narratives and

further

romanticise slave owners as good

people

acting on their better judgement.

However

it may be, these books tend to be voluminous, stating falsehood and having no significant relevance or representation of today's world which in my opinion a lot of

people

want to forget due to the horrific circumstances that occurred in the past. In my opinion,

although

, I believe

history

is important because

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it holds sentimental value, I

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agree that

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in many

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the representations of

history

such

as books and manuscripts are bogus and lack proper evidence to show the actual evident without adulteration of any form. In conclusion, even though

history

is of importance because of what

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represents, I reckon it is

also

fair to state that most of

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recorded could be untrue because they are retold stories and we can never be certain of the intentions behind the written information.