Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be used better elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the
arts
have become increasingly popular therefore
, some people
think that the government is wasting funds on it and that the money could be used for something else. It is disagreed
that Change to the active voice
disagrees
has disagreed
art
is a waste of money. Analysing the positive effect of the arts
, as well as the endless possibilities that it offers the
society will prove Correct article usage
apply
this
.
Firstly
, the arts
continually has tremendous positive effects on people
. For instance
, it is widely known that humans are very hardworking and sometimes need the opportunity to relax and destress. The arts
has
often been used to Change the verb form
have
fulfill
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fulfil
this
need by many people
and the after effects
of viewing or participating in Add a hyphen
after-effects
an
any form of Remove the article
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art
such
as an opera, live performances, theatrical productions, have been recorded to have positive effects like instant gratification on it’s
viewer and participants .
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Secondly
, the arts
has
provided many Change the verb form
have
people
with a safe and secure environment to express themselves and their creativity. For example
, many high school leavers now have the option of going into creating art
rather than studying compulsory subjects like medicine , law or engineering. With the help of the internet, young creative people
now have the opportunity to showcase their talents to live audiences, while also
making a stable income without the pressures of securing a higher degree or a regular job.
To summarise, the
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art
continually serves as therapy to many people
who seek it out, and also
, it has become an avenue for self expression
. Add a hyphen
self-expression
Therefore
, I disagree with the idea that the government is wasting money on the arts
because it is clear that the arts
contribute positively to the wellbeing of the public.Submitted by ochuksemeordiblessing on
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