Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be used better elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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arts

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have become increasingly popular

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, some

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think that the government is wasting funds on it and that the money could be used for something else. It

is disagreed

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that

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is a waste of money. Analysing the positive effect of the

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, as well as the endless possibilities that it offers

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society will prove

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, the

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continually has tremendous positive effects on

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.

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, it is widely known that humans are very hardworking and sometimes need the opportunity to relax and destress. The

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often been used to

fulfill

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need by many

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and the

after effects

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of viewing or participating in

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any form of

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as an opera, live performances, theatrical productions, have been recorded to have positive effects like instant gratification on

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viewer and participants .

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, the

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provided many

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with a safe and secure environment to express themselves and their creativity.

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, many high school leavers now have the option of going into creating

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rather than studying compulsory subjects like medicine , law or engineering. With the help of the internet, young creative

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now have the opportunity to showcase their talents to live audiences, while

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making a stable income without the pressures of securing a higher degree or a regular job. To summarise,

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art

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continually serves as therapy to many

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who seek it out, and

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, it has become an avenue for

self expression

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, I disagree with the idea that the government is wasting money on the

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because it is clear that the

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contribute positively to the wellbeing of the public.