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Some people think that introducing new technology can improve people's quality of life in the developing countries. However, others believe that free education should be offered. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Education and
technology
both
 are accelerating
the
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 better future. Some
people
 think that nation’s standard of living could be increased by commencing the
technology
 but other
opion
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option
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 to the costless study. According to
me
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,
both
 the factors are equally responsible which I shall discuss in
upcoming
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 paragraphs with my own opinion.
Firstly
, looking towards new
technology
, necessity is the mother of invention.
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 our tools of
technology
 could solve the drastic problems that we are facing in today’s world.
For example
, using hydro or electrical transportation would
leads
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 to
the
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 air pollution free environment, no global warming and use recycling and biodegradable products for
domestic
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 purpose would eliminate human to cater
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 problem of
atmosphere
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.
Secondly
, colonization into other planet
bring
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 the
second
 chance for
human
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 to survive,
for instance
, according to the survey conducted by the NASA stated that moving into the new planet and restart the life over there will be end up soon in 2025.
This
 is
also
 a piece of
technology
 which support
the
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people
’s life. Education is the right of every individual and the backbone of every nation in order to develop it economically and financially.
However
, in many countries, studying
into
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the
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colleges and universities could be
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a challenge
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challenge
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 for them because of not enough to pay the course fee.
Study
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 brings the fascination among
people
 to learn the morality, equality and have
sense
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a sense
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 of fraternity towards nature and social groups around them.
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,
mindset
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the mindset
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 of every
people
 would be more careful and concerned about the development of the country. In conclusion, I believe that
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both
requires
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 equal
attentions
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attention
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 in order to the development and welfare of the
people
 in any country.
Both
plays
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 their magnificent role
into
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 the country.
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