Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

People
think that
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recycle
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waste
from home is not effective enough. They say that the governments have to make it a legal requirement. It is indisputable that increasing the recycle
waste
needs to be done by coordinating of city-dwellers and governments. I believed that passing the law
of
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this
issue can increase recycling
wastes
. No one can deny that
people
now produce
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waste
every day even though the trends of
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waste
are increased. There are plenty
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of recycling to cultivate the consciousness of
people
, unfortunately, the results of it tend to be temporality.
For example
,
people
do not have
the
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consistent process of
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waste
because it not set as a permanent system, which including
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of recycling companies, unavailable of
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bins and no legal requirement of
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waste
.
In addition
, setting the permanent systems of
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wastes
should be done by the governments, particularly in the legal requirement to establish the law of household’s recycling
wastes
.
For instance
, the government should set up the system of recycling companies in each local area or make a policy for every household to distinguish their
wastes
, glasses and paper should classify as recycle
wastes
, others like fresh foods should put in the wet bins,
this
action
be
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considered and the government can
fine
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people
who are not following the rules. In conclusion, I think that laws are needed to make
people
recycle more of their
waste
. Any government which is blind to
this
point need to pay attention
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it, they should create
the
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recycle
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law to encourage
people
to recycle the
waste
as well as make them aware of environmental issues
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caused by human
wastes
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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