In many countries the widespread use of internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of traveling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

The usage of the internet has been more and more common for decades. Many workers and students adjust themselves fully to work at

home

thanks to

the

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online accessibility

instead

of going to school or work. As for me, owing to the internet , opportunities have emerged for them like

time

management and stress reduction .

However

, it can not be denied that

this

situation poses a hazard to their sociability. It is certainly true that working at

home

enables both employees and pupils to allocate more

time

in their daily life because they do not have to go to the workplace and

also

, preparing to these areas like clothing is disappeared.

For instance

, when ı participated in online lessons , ı can

fulfilled

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my responsibilities like cleaning easily because ı did not have to endure traffic congestion which disrupts daily life.

Moreover

, allocating more space for ourselves aids people to reduce stress because indulging themselves in activities like watching series can be more possible at working from

home

.

Therefore

,

time

management is provided

by

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online access to job and school lessons. Despite having some advantages , there are some drawbacks to both participate in both lessons and business

on

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online. The

first

thing is many people are predisposed to be asocial because communication with collaborates or classmates is decreased a lot. To exemplify, in the pandemic, ı encountered some communication problems with my classroom friends and ı felt so lonely.

In addition

, many employees claim that they tend to depression in

pandemic

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because they say that the working environment enhances their sociability. That’s why

,

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getting into touch

with

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face to face is more efficient than online touches. To sum up, working from

home

owing to the internet enables people to allocate more

time

for their daily activities and duties.

However

, it makes them be asocial and

this

situation leads to bad feelings.

Therefore

, attending these areas can be attached more importance rather than joining fully

via

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online.