People in major cities suffer from high levels of air pollution that causes health problems for many. Explain possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.
Air
pollution
is a common debate for nowadays inhabitants of most of
Change preposition
apply
metropolitan
cities. In some cases Add an article
the metropolitan
this
degrading air
bring
with it Change the verb form
brings
healthy
problem for the residents and the blame can be given to several causes. Even though there are some various probable solutions to lessen the impact of Add an article
a healthy
air
pollution
.
Firstly
, an obvious but significant reason could be founded in the increment of the vehicle's number in the cities. In fact
the advancement of technology has helped bring the cost of production lower thereby making it for the masses to afford a private car. Add a comma
,fact
Secondly
, suburbs
of metropolises Add an article
the suburbs
are often place
for factories' production that with its dangerous emissions contributes to the degradation of the Change the verb form
are often placed
are often placing
air
. The third
problem comes from domestic fuel burning that, contrary to what one might think, constitutes one of the most relevant causes.
Due to decreasing
of the Add an article
the decreasing
air
quality index and the always larger number of health problems caused by air
pollution
, governments should start providing different solutions. On one hand, in order to reduce the number of private vehicles
politicians could act with restrictive laws which Add a comma
,vehicles
penalizes
owners of combustion cars or introduce taxes for the possession of Change the verb form
penalize
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
second automobiles
a second automobile
second
automobiles. On the other
hand
countries should choose to increase the public e-transports and at the same time make it more affordable than the price of fuel. Add a comma
,hand
In addition
, a relevant way to reduce the percentage of dangerous particles in the air
could be using renewable energy, such
as solar
panel for warming houses or wind turbines to replace Add an article
a solar
production
energy of the factories.
To conclude, the worldly picture of the severity of diseases caused by Correct article usage
the production
air
pollution
is drastic, health problems continue multiplying for many reasons. Despite there are some governments already act to reduce carbon emissions I am convinced that many others
solution could still be Replace the word
other
instituite
.Correct your spelling
instituted
institute
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