People in major cities suffer from high levels of air pollution that causes health problems for many. Explain possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.

Air

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pollution

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is a common debate for nowadays inhabitants of most

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metropolitan

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cities. In some cases

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degrading

air

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bring

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problem for the residents and the blame can be given to several causes. Even though there are some various probable solutions to lessen the impact of

air

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pollution

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.

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, an obvious but significant reason could be founded in the increment of the vehicle's number in the cities. In

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the advancement of technology has helped bring the cost of production lower thereby making it for the masses to afford a private car.

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suburbs

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of metropolises

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for factories' production that with its dangerous emissions contributes to the degradation of the

air

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. The

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problem comes from domestic fuel burning that, contrary to what one might think, constitutes one of the most relevant causes. Due to

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of the

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quality index and the always larger number of health problems caused by

air

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pollution

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, governments should start providing different solutions. On one hand, in order to reduce the number of private

vehicles

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politicians could act with restrictive laws which

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owners of combustion cars or introduce taxes for the possession of

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automobiles.

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countries should choose to increase the public e-transports and at the same time make it more affordable than the price of fuel.

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, a relevant way to reduce the percentage of dangerous particles in the

air

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could be using renewable energy,

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panel for warming houses or wind turbines to replace

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energy of the factories. To conclude, the worldly picture of the severity of diseases caused by

air

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pollution

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is drastic, health problems continue multiplying for many reasons. Despite there are some governments already act to reduce carbon emissions I am convinced that many

others

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solution could still be

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