People in major cities suffer from high levels of air pollution that causes health problems for many. Explain possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.

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is a common debate for nowadays inhabitants of most
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cities. In some cases
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degrading
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brings with it a health problem for the residents and the blame can be given to several causes. Even though there are some various probable solutions to lessen the impact of
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, an obvious but significant reason could be founded in the increment of the vehicle's number in the cities. In fact, the advancement of technology has helped bring the cost of production lower thereby making it for the masses to afford a private car.
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, the suburbs of metropolises are often the place for factories' production that with its dangerous emissions contributes to the degradation of the
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problem comes from domestic fuel burning that, contrary to what one might think, constitutes one of the most relevant causes. Due to the decreasing of the
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quality index and the always larger number of health problems caused by
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, governments should start providing different solutions. On one hand, in order to reduce the number of private vehicles, politicians could act with restrictive laws which penalize owners of combustion cars or introduce taxes for the possession of a
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, countries should choose to increase public e-transports and at the same time make it more affordable than the price of fuel.
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, a relevant way to reduce the percentage of dangerous particles in the
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could be using renewable energy,
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as solar panels for warming houses or wind turbines to replace the production energy of the factories. To conclude, the worldly picture of the severity of diseases caused by
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is drastic, health problems continue multiplying for many reasons. Despite there are some governments already act to reduce carbon emissions I am convinced that many other solutions could still be instituted.
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