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Modern shopping malls are highly convenient for people however small markets are still popular among consumers discuss both these views and give your opinion

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The way
people
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shop
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 has been revolutionized in recent years. While some
people
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 feel that it is comfortable to buy
products
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 at shopping
malls
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, others still prefer to purchase at retail shops.
This
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sides and explain why I feel that
people
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 should be encouraged to
shop
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 at local markets. One main reason why
people
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 feel convenient to purchase at
malls
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 is because of its variety. There will be
different
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a different
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 range of
products
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, which will
also
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 have all the necessities at a single location;
this
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 will allow
people
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 to feel comfortable and make them
to
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shop
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 there irrespective of other factors.
For instance
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,
people
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 in India go to
mall
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the mall
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 during weekends and
shop
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variety
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a variety
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 of
products
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, from grocery to clothing. Once they finished shopping they might have dinner at the same place and return back. If
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malls
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 are not available,
people
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 might feel inconvenient to commute from one place to another to buy different things.
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, I believe that shopping at
local
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the local
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 market is highly affordable.
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 is because those places do not need additional expenditures
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 as fancy decorations and
shop
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 rents.
Moreover
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, these retail sellers might
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 provide attractive discounts if we bargain with those owners. In Canada,
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, local artisans
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sell
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 souvenirs with more than 50% discount, which will not be available in sophistic
malls
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.
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, the
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 owners buy their product directly from
manufacturing
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the manufacturing
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 unit;
therefore
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, it can be
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 reliable. In conclusion,
although
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 some
people
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 are tempted to
shop
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 at
malls
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 due to
its
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their
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 comfort, the local markets are cost-effective and reliable. In my opinion, it is better to buy valuable
products
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 at an affordable price in markets than shopping conveniently at
malls
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.

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