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While mobile phones have many advantages a number of problems have also resulted from them or the ways in which they are used. What are some of those problems? What solutions can you suggest for solving these problems.

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Today, one can not think
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 without a mobile, as there are
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 of benefits
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, we can not ignore the drawback arisen due to it and in the manner of its usage.
This
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the problems of it and the probable solutions for the same. There are mainly two types of drawbacks.
First
, its rays are harmful
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 the brain, and
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 memory system and
Second
, its
use
 while walking or driving becomes
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 for
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 of accidents.
for example
, we have read a number of time in the newspaper that while driving a vehicle driver loses his balance as he was using his mobile and thrashes people who
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 along the road. To reduce the harmful rays, the
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 should draft policies of mobile manufacturing in a way that endanger the public at least possible manner and for the
use
 of cell phone while driving, walking and running, the technology should
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 and fit in a vehicle so that a person cannot
use
 it when he is on the vehicle. To illustrate, there is a technology in the new cars that
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ring siren when the driver does not tie the seat belt. To conclude,
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proper
use
 of mobile can be beneficial
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whereas
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the wrong
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use
 may cause
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a big problem.
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